Rest the draft
Put the manuscript away for at least two weeks, longer if you can. Work on something else. When you return, you will read it more like a reader and less like its author. This single step catches more problems than any software.
Editing Your Manuscript
To edit your manuscript, work from the biggest problems to the smallest: fix structure first, then sentences, then grammar and consistency, and proofread last. Doing it in that order saves time, because there is no point polishing a paragraph that you may cut. This guide, part of our author resources, shows you how to edit a book yourself, how to use feedback and when to bring in a professional.
Editing is where a rough draft becomes a book, and it usually takes longer than writing the draft did. It is also where many authors waste money, by paying for a proofread when the structure still needs work. Read on and you will know exactly what your manuscript needs.
People use the word "editing" for four different jobs, and mixing them up is the most common mistake. Each level has its own focus, and each belongs at a different time. Here they are in the order you should do them.
| Level | What it looks at | When to do it |
|---|---|---|
| Developmental editing | Structure, plot or argument, pacing, characters, chapter order, audience fit | After a complete draft, before anything else |
| Line editing | Sentence flow, word choice, tone, clarity, voice | After the structure is settled |
| Copyediting | Grammar, punctuation, spelling, usage, consistency, style rules | After the text is final in content |
| Proofreading | Typos, formatting slips and last errors in the formatted pages | Last, on the finished layout |
Developmental editing asks whether the book works. Line editing asks whether each sentence works. Copyediting asks whether the text is correct and consistent. Proofreading asks whether anything slipped through. If you want to know more about any level, read about developmental editing, line editing, copyediting and proofreading.
Each level also needs a different kind of attention. A developmental editor reads like a critic, a line editor like a musician, a copyeditor like a lawyer and a proofreader like a detective. That is why one person rarely does all four well on the same pass. Do not skip a level because you are tired of the book. Skipping developmental work and jumping to proofreading is like painting a house with a cracked foundation. The paint looks fine for a while, and then the problems show through. The reverse is also true: do not pay for a deep structural edit if your draft is already tight and you just need polish. A sample edit can tell you which you need.
You may also hear other names. A manuscript assessment is a shorter read with a written report, a substantive edit is another term for developmental editing, and a copy and line edit are sometimes combined. If a quote uses a term you do not recognize, ask the editor to describe exactly what is included, how many passes it covers and what you will receive back.
Self-editing will not replace a professional, but it makes professional help cheaper and more effective, because the editor can focus on what you cannot see. Think of it as three passes after a rest, each with a single goal. Trying to fix everything at once is how editing turns into a month of tinkering with the same chapter.
Put the manuscript away for at least two weeks, longer if you can. Work on something else. When you return, you will read it more like a reader and less like its author. This single step catches more problems than any software.
Read the whole manuscript without fixing sentences. Make notes on bigger questions. Does the opening promise something the book delivers? Does every chapter move the story or argument forward? Are there scenes, examples or sections that repeat each other? Where does your attention drift? In fiction, check pacing, motivation, plot holes and whether the characters change. In nonfiction, check that your ideas build in a sensible order and that each chapter answers one question. Do not worry about wording yet, since a paragraph you love may not survive. Many authors make a reverse outline here, writing one line per chapter about what it actually does, which exposes gaps and repeats at a glance. Cut, merge and reorder before moving on. This is the hardest pass emotionally, because cutting a scene you labored over hurts. Save cuts in a separate file so nothing is truly lost, and you may find you never miss them.
Now work through the text line by line. Tighten wordy phrases. Replace vague verbs with specific ones. Cut filler words such as "very," "really" and "just." Vary your sentence length so the rhythm does not become flat, and watch for repeated sentence openings. Look at dialogue tags and keep them simple. Read each chapter aloud, or use text-to-speech, because your ears catch clumsy phrasing that your eyes skip. If you stumble while reading, rewrite that sentence. A Purdue Online Writing Lab style reference is handy here for clarity and usage.
Last, hunt for typos, spelling, punctuation and consistency. Check that names, dates, places and facts match throughout. Make a style sheet listing how you spell names, whether you use serial commas and how you format numbers. Choose a reference such as the Chicago Manual of Style and follow it consistently. Try reading the manuscript backward, one paragraph at a time, or view it in a different font and size. Both tricks help you see words you have read a hundred times. Search for words you overuse, since most writers lean on a few favorites, and check the spelling of every name in one sweep using your search tool.
Use these lists on each pass. Print them if that helps, and tick each item only when you have actually checked it, not when you assume it is fine.
Before you start
Structure pass
Sentence and mechanics passes
You cannot judge your own book perfectly, because you know what you meant. Beta readers show you what the page actually does. Choose three to five people who read your genre and will be honest. Friends and family are kind, which is not always useful.
Give readers specific questions rather than "what did you think?" Ask where they got bored, which character they liked least, what confused them and whether they would keep reading. Ask them to note, not fix, problems. If two or more readers raise the same issue, take it seriously. If only one does, treat it as an opinion and weigh it against your goals.
Critique partners and writing groups work in a similar way, with swapped chapters and regular meetings. A word of caution: do not rewrite your book to please every reader. Feedback is information, and you decide what to do with it. Keep the group small and the schedule clear. Wait to share until after your own structure pass so people are not distracted by problems you could have fixed.
Give readers a deadline, such as two or three weeks, and thank them whatever they say. If you feel defensive, wait a day before replying. Sort feedback into three piles: problems you agree with, problems you disagree with and things worth thinking about. You will often find the same underlying issue described in different ways, and that pattern is the most valuable signal you will get.
Not every book needs every level. A tightly plotted novel by an experienced writer may need only a copyedit and a proofread, while a first memoir often benefits from a structural read first. Your sample edit, your beta reader feedback and your budget should all guide the decision.
Hire an editor when you have taken the book as far as you can alone, when you plan to publish and want a professional result, or when you suspect problems you cannot name. Readers do notice errors, and a book that is clean on the page feels more trustworthy from the first chapter.
Fees vary widely across the industry, and the Editorial Freelancers Association editorial rates chart shows typical ranges for different kinds of work. At Small Press Distribution, per-word prices start as follows, and your fixed written quote depends on length, genre, research depth, revision rounds and deadline.
| Service | Starting price | 60,000 words starts from |
|---|---|---|
| Proofread | From $0.012 per word | $720 |
| Developmental edit | From $0.030 per word | $1,800 |
| Complete edit (line edit, copyedit and proofread) | From $0.045 per word | $2,700 |
Turnaround depends on length too. These are typical timelines, confirmed in your written quote.
| Manuscript length | Copyediting or proofreading | Developmental editing |
|---|---|---|
| Up to 5,000 words | 3 to 5 business days | 5 to 7 business days |
| 20,000 to 40,000 words | 1 to 2 weeks | 2 to 3 weeks |
| 60,000 to 90,000 words | 2 to 3 weeks (copyediting and line editing) | 3 to 5 weeks |
First-time clients receive a free sample edit of the first 1,000 words, with a recommendation on which type of edit the manuscript needs, within 3 to 5 business days of request. See our book editing services, our manuscript editing services and the pricing page for more, or get a free consultation to talk it through.
How do you choose? Look for experience in your genre, a clear description of what each edit includes and a willingness to explain their process. Be cautious of anyone who guarantees a result or promises a published book. Whoever you hire, ask for a sample, check how they handle your genre and make sure the price, schedule and revision rounds are written down before work starts.
A clean file speeds up the work and lowers the chance of misunderstandings. Before you send anything, do the following.
Think about format too. Most editors prefer a Word file, and our team accepts manuscripts in any format. Keep images, tables and special characters in the file, and mention anything unusual, such as footnotes, poetry line breaks or a glossary, so it is handled correctly.
Be ready to answer questions about your style choices. A good editor will ask, because your voice matters.
It also helps to tell your editor what you are worried about. If you suspect the middle drags or the ending feels rushed, say so, since editors work faster when they know where to look. If you have a publishing deadline, such as a launch date or a conference, share it at the start so the schedule can be built around it. Also decide in advance whether you want only comments or direct changes, because that affects how the work is done and how long it takes.
Most professional edits come back in Word with tracked changes and comments. Tracked changes show every edit, so nothing happens without your approval. Read through slowly, ideally in one or two sittings so you keep a sense of the whole. Accept the changes you agree with, reject the ones you do not, and respond to comments in the margin. If you disagree, remember the editor works for your book, so ask why before deciding.
At our company, tracked changes are reviewed by the author before anything is finalized, and deadlines are confirmed at the start of each engagement. Save the original, the edited version and your final accepted version, with dates, so you can always step back.
A few habits make this stage smoother. Work through the document in order rather than jumping around, because later comments often refer to earlier ones. Keep a list of questions for your editor and send them together. Do not accept every change on autopilot, since a suggestion that fits the editor's taste may not fit your voice. And once the edit is final, run one last read from start to finish to be sure your accepted changes did not create new inconsistencies.
There are four: developmental editing for structure, line editing for sentences, copyediting for grammar and consistency, and proofreading for final errors on the formatted pages. Do them in that order, because each one assumes the previous work is finished. Paying for a proofread before the structure is settled usually means paying twice.
Most books need several rounds. Plan at least three self-edit passes (structure, sentences, mechanics), then professional editing, then a proofread. Stop when changes become minor, such as swapping a word for a near-synonym, rather than counting rounds. Be careful of endless tinkering, which can drain the life out of a book.
You can and should do a thorough self-edit, but you cannot see everything in your own work. A fresh professional reader catches errors and structural problems that you have stopped noticing. Combine the two for the best result: your own edit first, then an outside editor. Authors who arrive with a clean draft usually get more from the professional's time.
Costs depend on length and the kind of edit. At our company, per-word prices start from $0.012 for proofreading, $0.030 for developmental editing and $0.045 for a complete edit, with a fixed written quote before work begins. The final figure depends on length, genre and timeline, so ask for a free sample edit first.
Copyediting corrects grammar, usage and consistency in the text, and happens before layout. Proofreading is the final check for remaining typos and layout slips, and happens after the book is formatted. They are different jobs, and most publishing projects need both.
Now you know how to edit your manuscript: layer by layer, with rest between passes and help where it counts. When you are ready, move on to publishing your book, or submit your manuscript for a free sample edit if you are a first-time client. Whatever you choose, edit in layers, keep your own voice and trust the process. A well-edited book earns better reviews, and it respects the readers who will spend hours inside it.
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